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Post by Infamy on Sept 19, 2007 20:26:18 GMT -5
Short and sweet. Wordy poetry can get bothersome, and it's refreshing to read something like this.
Did you mean to misspell 'forwards' up there? Just a thing I noticed.
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Post by Eikou Hibiki on Sept 19, 2007 22:02:38 GMT -5
Mi likes it. I look forward to reading newer works.
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Post by Anita on Sept 19, 2007 22:23:06 GMT -5
Huh, woops. I guess i've always spelled it like that for some reason. Sounds right to me. >< Guess its not. But thanks for pointing it out. And i'm glad you like it.
I've got many others but that one seemed to be the better of them. Most of them are poems from something I was thinking of at the time or what not. But when my brain starts working again i'll get something new up for you. :]
Thanks again.
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Post by Sokenfused on Sept 25, 2007 11:48:47 GMT -5
I liked this piece alot and I'm usually not a huge fan of rhymed poetry, but it works well here. Looking forward to reading more Anita.
-Soken
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